Communication 101: Keep it simple, please

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By CAROL MUSYOKA
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Abstract

• The total web page advert is a shadow boxing stab in the dead of night at attempting to elucidate the supply of Mumias’ woes whereas telling everybody to face down and let the receiver supervisor do their job.
• The one factor that stored me persistently going to the top of the two-column publication was abject curiosity at the place the blended messaging that was leaping off the pages was going to land.

Within the Every day Nation of June 17, 2021, the Governor of Kakamega County put out a full web page communiqué titled “The Revival of Mumias Sugar Firm Restricted”. It was a variety of studying. So much.

The one factor that stored me persistently going to the top of the two-column publication was abject curiosity at the place the blended messaging that was leaping off the pages was going to land. Firstly we have been taken by means of a reasonably convoluted historical past of the shareholding of Mumias, adopted by a historic reminder of the governing laws in an act that was an undefined acronym — AFFA Act — lastly ending with a victorious shout-out to the receiver manger (sic) for preventing the great struggle, nearly ending the race and, hopefully, holding the religion!

The ultimate sentence was a shot throughout the MV Kakamega bow: “The County Authorities of Kakamega will full (sic) help all of the efforts that can carry the manufacturing unit again to operations instantly and shall ignore those who suppose that this is a chance to profit themselves on the expense of the poor farmers and residents of Kakamega.”

Let’s begin initially. The broad missive struggles with what was Mumias’ standing as an integrated entity by stating “Within the yr 2001, the corporate modified standing from a public to a non-public firm, by means of public itemizing…” Look, you possibly can’t change from a public to a non-public firm by means of a public itemizing. That by its very nature is oxymoronic.

The author’s noble intentions to tell emerge later within the sentence which continues “….bringing down the federal government shareholding to twenty% and enabling the farmers and different entities to take a stake within the shareholding by means of Mumias Outgrowers Firm and individually.”

Aha! So the author was primarily attempting to inform us that what was once a State company as a result of the truth that it was majority-owned by the federal government at 71 p.c, was diminished to being a ‘private’ asset when that shareholding was diminished to twenty p.c. And for the author, the other of public is non-public after all. However then it went by means of a public itemizing, the place the author meant that the shares of the corporate beforehand owned by the federal government have been put up on the market on the Nairobi Securities Alternate and the corporate was transformed right into a public firm as its articles now permitted invites to the general public to subscribe for its shares and didn’t prohibit the proper of shareholders to switch these shares. Following conversion right into a public firm, it then turned a publicly listed firm when it listed on the NSE.

The communiqué then will get actually attention-grabbing when the governor begins to attribute the “public-into-private-into-public” shenanigans because the bane of the corporate’s woes. It says and I quote: “Sadly, and for causes that at the moment are water beneath the bridge each Mumias Outgrowers Firm and the farmers relinquished their shareholding by means of the inventory alternate ensuing into an ineffective shareholding and governance construction that had 71% of the shares held by people by means of the NSE, 20% by the nationwide authorities and 9% by different non-public establishments. On account of this poor governance construction the corporate quickly slided (sic) into loss making and have become unable to fulfill its obligations to the farmers and collectors.”

If I used to be requested to “woman-splain” what our gallant author was venturing to posit, I might say that the unique consumers of the shares on the public itemizing, being the farmers and the outgrowers firm, management+alt+deleted their approach out of the corporate and the resultant shareholders have been “ineffective”, which “ineffectiveness” led to a poor governance construction.

However wait, truly in the event you learn that sentence the phrases shareholding and governance construction are nearly getting used interchangeably as a result of as soon as the shareholding is outlined, then that’s what is defined as being the poor governance construction that led the corporate into loss making.

Not poor administration by its executives. Not questionable oversight by the board of the corporate that’s presupposed to be the apex establishment guiding the organisation. Simply plain previous shareholders who held 71 p.c of the corporate having purchased the shares from the primary consumers — key stakeholders themselves — who bailed out for causes that flowed in a river over which the bridge to prosperity was seemingly lacking.

I really feel the county’s ache within the tragic trajectory that this public-private-public-now-under-receivership asset has taken. The total web page advert is a shadow boxing stab in the dead of night at attempting to elucidate the supply of Mumias’ woes whereas telling everybody to face down and let the receiver supervisor do their job. Invariably it leaves the reader feeling just like the recipient of this message: “Sorry I simply noticed your textual content from final evening, are you guys nonetheless on the restaurant?”